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Increase Sales! 60+ Words to Add to Your Listing Item Description to Get More Buyers

Increase Sales! 60+ Words to Add to Your Listing Item Description to Get More Buyers

Posted by Big Brand Wholesale.com on 28th Jun 2020

Ever listen to a TV commercial? Did you ever consider the actual transcript of the television promo? If the lotion company promotion just said “8 ounce lotion. Ships Priority Mail” would anyone even buy it??? ...Of course not!

That’s not exciting and there’s no reason impulse to buy. Instead the lotion company says “Leaves your skin silky smooth to touch. Refreshing scent of summery pomegranate with a touch of garden-ripe strawberry. Perfect for daily use!”. AND the difference between the TV ad and your online listing is that the ad has VIDEO whereas you only have words to sweep your buyer off their feet and get them to smash the "Buy Now" button… so your words have to “seal the deal” in a couple quick sentences. Let's take a look at this 30-second Dove TV ad from the UK.  

What's this ad's "buzz words?" 

  • Moisture
  • Volume
  • Oxygen
  • "Wish your hair felt _____"
  • Bounce
  • "Some women wish..."
  • New
  • Fine
  • Flat
  • Infused
  • "Moisturized Feel"
  • Weigh-Down
  • You like that?!
  • Conditioning
  • Enjoy
  • 95% More
  • Advanced

YES, they put ALL of those words and phrases into a 30-sec ad!  That's interesting, eh?  In 30 seconds they were able to convey that this specific product is great!!!  But if the commercial just said "Dove Oxygen Moisture Shampoo. Full Size. $5.99"... we would all skip that 3-second ad.  They sucker us in with "exciting words" and "catchy phrases".

So let’s check out some words you can add to your listing to boost your sales -

DESCRIPTIVE WORDS

  • Soft
  • Heavenly-Soft
  • Cozy
  • Oh-So Cozy!
  • Winter-Cozy
  • Campfire-Cozy
  • Flowing / Flowy
  • Silky
  • Luxurious
  • Smooth
  • Sleek
  • Textured
  • Chic
  • (instead of “patterned”, learn the actual pattern) Preppy Argyle, Beautiful Checkers, Sophisticated Hounds Tooth or Waist-Slimming Stripes
  • Bold
  • Impressive
  • Daring (low cut or similar)
  • Darling
  • Dashing
  • Dramatic
  • Dazzling
  • Impressive
  • Ooh-La-La  (lingerie or similar)
  • Va-Va-Voom (pushup lingerie or similar)
  • Voluptuous (pushup lingerie or similar)
  • Jaw-Dropping (short / mini / revealing / low-cut)
  • Head-Turning (short / mini / revealing / low-cut)
  • Ravishing
  • Flirty (short / mini / revealing / low-cut)
  • Handsome
  • Masculine
  • Manly
  • Grand
  • Gaudy
  • Glam
  • Glamorous 
  • Gorgeous
  • Cheeky
  • Crazy
  • Insane
  • Wild
  • Awesome
  • Awe-Inspiring
  • Bad Ass  (Leather)
  • Biker (Leather)
  • Ride or Die (Leather)
  • Rogue
  • Foxy
  • Fun
  • Playful
  • Energetic
  • Flamboyant
  • Joyful / Joyous
  • Delightful
  • 5-Star or Five-Star
  • Celebrity
  • Star-Struck
  • Sublime
  • Subliminal

TIP:  If words don't come natural to you, pickup a Thesaurus for under $8 on Amazon and keep it right next to your computer!  It's a major game-changer!  In less than 1 year you will no longer need it!

Honest to Goodness, it may sound silly but a simple Thesaurus is a game-changer!  If you genuinely take the time to read it you will turn into a word-scholar!  You genuinely will be astounded at the words you learn!

Next, let's put what we learned into practice.  Take a look at gutternyc's ebay listing photo:

What are 3 words or phrases you can think of to describe this other than "Black", "Kids" and "Character".  Think of actual descriptive words... such as:

  • Throwback
  • "A comic book fav"
  • Dark
  • Edgy
  • 90's style 
  • Cult Favorite
  • Cult Classic
  • Toxic green on true-black makes these graphics pop!!
  • Show your love for this comic fav!
  • A great gift for the comic-lover in your life
  • *Transform* yourself into a Spawn Fan with this tee (Spawn has the ability to transform)
  • You might return to Hell if you don't grab this deal (Spawn will be sent back to hell)
  • Get retribution with this ______
  • Show your support of _______
  • Avoid Hell with this _________

Now let's say you looked at that shirt and thought "Who the F is Spawn?"... Google is your BFF!  Simply Google search "Spawn Character".  You don't even need to read the actual content to get an idea of who Spawn is, when this comic was released and more!  You actually think I knew that Spawn has the ability to Transform and will be sent to hell?!? Come on now!

Let's try one more time then we will move on to the next "Buzz Word" Topic.  Take a look at this top and think of 3 PHRASES....

Here's what I would say:

  • Whether you're hitting a Rave or just want to turn heads on a Tuesday, this hologram metallic skirt is truly a jaw-dropper!  
  • Be a total trend-setter with this glamorous holographic silver mini!
  • Comic-Con aint got nothin' on this beauty!  
  • This Celebrity-Style silver hologram mini-skirt is sure to draw attention!
  • If you're not the type of girl to shop at JC Penny, this insane skirt is meant for you!  Silver holographic material compliments a cute, pleated look,
  • If you're looking at this listing you clearly love compliments!  
  • This skirt is a must-have for every girl who loves attention!  Holographic silver pleats draws attention to your legs while making your waist dazzle!

Of course you don't want to use all those phrases; just pick one or two then get to the actual product info.  BUT... DEPENDING ON YOUR AUDIENCE, you can expand into phrases that would entice them to purchase, such as:

  • Classy, yet trashy!  
  • Be the bad girl!
  • Meow!  Bad little kitty! 
  • Keep his eyes wanting more
  • Bad little Schoolgirl ;) 
  • All this beauty needs is some stilettos or knee-high patent leather boots!
  • Perfect for exotic dancing. A real attention-getter!
  • Need the perfect outfit?  We also sell panties!
  • Such a booty-ful skirt!

TEXTURE

  • Frilly
  • Girly
  • Lacey
  • Sexy
  • Sultry
  • Extravagant
  • Highly-Detailed (specifically applying to beads, embroidery or even a pattern)
  • Intricate
  • Immaculate
  • Professional
  • Jaw-Dropping
  • Stunning
  • Casual
  • Ultra-Casual
  • Executive (boss!)
  • Luxury (Silk, Cashmere, Wool)
  • High-End (Cashmere, Wool)
  • Upscale 
  • Tight-Knit
  • Loose-Knit
  • Airy (Loose Fit)
  • Curve-Clinging (spandex)

PHRASES

  • “Perfect for ____”: the club, a night on the town, business, a workday at the office, impressing your date, a dreamy sleep, a night by the fireplace, turning heads, looking like a boss!, making your friends jealous
  • “Impress your _____”: friends, coworkers, haters (yes, haters! If it’s super sexy, 8” high heels, why not?!”, Instagram followers, YouTube Subscribers, Onlookers, husband, spouse, boyfriend, girlfriend, significant other.
  • “Look like a ____ in this _____”!: celebrity, boss, professional, executive
  • “Turn that frown upside down with / in this _____” Motivational shirt, organizer purse, shapewear, etc
  • “Keep warm all winter in this _____” or “Stay cool all summer in this _____”
  • “If you’re always ______, this is your solution/ answer / problem-solver!!”: hot, cold, deciding what to wear, looking to impress, relaxation, a sleep-filled night, a *fun* date

I hope this article helped inspire you to create 5-star listings!

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